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Kapu and Jino pg 1-2

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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I quite like the layout and the colour work here, you've done a fantastic paint job on it.
I would worry a bit about the lighting, I know it has enough brightness and what not, but my concern is more on light source and direction.
I would wonder if a stronger contrast would be well suited for the direct light. As far as I understand the rest of the apartment is dark, so only that one light bulb is on with a little ambient coming from the window in the other room.
My point with that is that I can't quite tell were exactly that lightbulb is.

Your panel layout is nice, standard, but well thought out.
The use of P.O.V. plays well.
The light bulb on its own is good.
It has but a small amount of improvement, otherwise an exceptional piece and I'm sure any anthro fan would love to snag a folder of this comic to their faves.

I know you can push it farther <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile) - :)"/>